PSA For SB: Slenderman

(Psss, Click on the images to make them larger so you can read c;)
With my storyboard, I went through a new version of my storyboard and then a basic speech placement.
From the original, I added a short description of what Slenderman is (for those of you that don't know). I also edited panels so the narrative would flow better and visuals would be present for the speech.
The final, refined version of my storyboard is:

The in between version from the first to the final is:
(It is not much different from the final)

And, the first ever version I did was this:

This on is what started this whole process.