With my storyboard, I went through a new version of my storyboard and then a basic speech placement.
From the original, I added a short description of what Slenderman is (for those of you that don't know). I also edited panels so the narrative would flow better and visuals would be present for the speech.
The final, refined version of my storyboard is:
(It is not much different from the final)
And, the first ever version I did was this:
This on is what started this whole process.